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    “NEANDERTHAL SEEKS HUMAN” by Penny Reid

    Penny Reid is one of my favorite contemporary writers.
    Not only do I like her writing’ style, but I appreciate her for how she writes normal and smart feminine characters.

    Only after I read her first book, “Neanderthal seeks human,” I discovered that it was written as a bet with a co-worker. (Before she became a full writer, Penny used to work as a biomedical researcher.) And she only wrote the book to prove to her colleague that there could be exciting love stories.

    Bellow is the real love declaration between Janie și Quinn.

    “- I’m afraid that we’re moving too fast and that this is just infatuation.

    – I don’t know what this is.
    He breathed in as though he was going to continue, but then he paused. Finally, his words deliberate and cautiously crafted, Quinn said,
    – I think about you all the time. And I can’t guarantee that this isn’t infatuation because sometimes I think it has to be. But… I don’t think of you as perfect.

    – Oh… ok. 
    My eyelashes blinked in rapid succession, and my brain started compiling the list of all my imperfections. 
    – Is it because of my height? My seepage of trivial facts? My granny panties?

    – No, listen. That’s not… If this was just infatuation, then I would, we would become disillusioned at some point, yes?

    I nodded, and I was sure it was unconvincing.

    – I don’t have misconceptions that you’re flawless. And you don’t have any illusions about me.
    I know that life, in general, terrifies you; I know that you are frequently oblivious to the obvious, and I know that you are completely irrational at times.
    And all that drives me crazy. You drive me crazy.
    But, in spite of how totally nuts you are, I wouldn’t change anything about you.

    I pressed my lips together and started biting the inside of my cheek. I bravely met his pointed stare. 
    – You think I’m totally nuts?

    He nodded and sighed. 
    – Yes. And I… can’t stop thinking about you. Janie…

    I sighed. 
    – Yes

    – What are you thinking?

     His voice was a whisper, his breath against my cheek.My eyes fluttered open and I licked my lips, wanting his mouth on mine, driven to mad honesty. 
    – I love you.

    I sensed rather that saw his self-satisfied smile.

    – Good.”

     

    Kindle, 2015

     

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